violet
violet
Apr 09, 2024

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We don't say it
but our bones melt into one
and become the shape of it

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About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Country/Region: GBR

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Comments

Geezer

to say the least. I almost get it; but that's okay, I'm sure that it wasn't written just for me. ~ Geezer.
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Geezer

like it was me that hadn't posted but three poems in the last ten years! I am most pleased to see and read your work again. I guess I must have missed a bit of it when I was hospitalized with pneumonia. Yeah, I have COPD and on oxygen, but still here. I keep turning up like the proverbial bad penny or a piece of steel, hard to get rid of and attracted to Neo. like by a magnet. I do hope that you will be around more. ~ Geez.
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