I am mountain
I am sea
I am desert
I am tree
I am the taste of salt
I am the rushing rain
I am the smell of earth rising
I am red poppies of the plain
I am universal
I am the only
I am of all present
I am of the lonely
I am your vision
I am your beam
I am your light
Your realized dream
I am the dust in the stars
The infinite being
The endless space and time
The knowing, all-seeing
I am the "I Am"
Your heart, mind, and soul
The forces you exist within
The partial, the whole
The definite, the certain
Yet, still... the loss of control
I am great abundance
As I am the black hole
I am the "I Am"
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Dear Lavender,
this is a wonderful piece, taking inventory of all you are made of. I really like it! my favorite lines are:
I am of all present
I am the only
I am the one
I am of the lonely
almost like a recipe'
*hugs, Cat
Hello, Cat,
Everything is energy, and everything is connected. I'm so glad you enjoyed this one.
Thank you, as always, for reading!
Lx
Dear Lavender,
"Everything is energy, and everything is connected" Yes! and energy can be broken down but it cannot be destroyed!" Thank you for this!
*hugs, Cat
Hello, Cat!
Thank you for reading again, and sharing your thoughts!
I appreciate you!
Lx
I think...
that you can even up the rhythm, and make this smoother.
In nature, you exist
Within the partial, the whole
And still... loss of control
I am the abundance
I am the black hole.
I am in agreement with Candlewitch, this sounds very like a recipe.
A recipe for living; with the measurements splashed and dashed.
~ Geez.
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Hello, Geezer!
I'll think over your suggestions. I don't think this one is quite finished yet - exploring the amazing way energy connects everything around us.
Thanks for your thoughts and help with this!
L
I enjoyed your preception and
I enjoyed your preception and description of the energy that surrounds us.
Great poem, I liked it very much.
Hello, Clentin!
I'm so glad you enjoyed this. Thank you for reading and commenting!
L