"Where are we going?" his young daughter asked.
"To cheer up some of my friends," he replied.
"They seem to be a lot of work for you," she offered with concern.
"Yes," he said, “You’re right. The very best kind of work."
Feb 24, 2024
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About This Poem
Last Few Words: Lessons...
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
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Hello, Michael,
An endearing, brief conversation that offers so much. Reminds me a bit of the exchanges Winnie-the-Pooh shares with Piglet. Gentle and small in words, but big on important lessons.
Thank you,
L
Busted - LOL! That is exactly
Busted - LOL! That is exactly where I got the inspiration in ragard to the format. You poetry detective you! Thanks for stopping by.
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Really?!
That is too cool! Well, it's meant as a compliment! You are in wonderful company with Pooh and A.A. Milne!
L
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...that, in my opinion has got to be the most meaningful and true thing ever written. It is what it is all about!!!!!!!!!
Thank you Michael!
Very kind L! Happy you liked
Very kind L! Happy you liked this piece, and really apreciate you sharing your thoughts.
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Quick, concise, and
Quick, concise, and meaningful. Often that is what poems can offer, and you delivered. Well done.
Thanks, Will
Thank you Will! Best
Thank you Will!
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