Jokerface82
Jokerface82
Feb 22, 2024

KILLER THRILLER

Fan of mirror strikes lit
behind a Luminescence
globe of moonlight. Hidden
body shape away in a damp
entry.

Washed in blood deep
serrated cuts defensive
Wrists cut open to bits
and shreds of fallen
salmon like flesh and a

plunged dripped ruby heart.
A yawn of dark mist
disguising the depravity

Another soul an empty
vessel to the spirit
world !. A sound of sirens
a light cone searching
passing.

wet souls slapping soles
chasing, scouting for the
Ice cold Killer

About This Poem

Review Request Direction: How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Uk, GBR

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