Jeez! Not Another Love Poem!

It was my silliness, I thought.
Or maybe it was just the smile.
Turns out it was our laughter.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: That's it - LOL!

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Region, Country: San Francisco Bay Area - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Bukowski

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Comments

hello,

Yes, That will do it....

*hugs, Cat

What Attracted Us...

What attracted us (Cat and myself) to each other was our outlandish sense of humor. It is amazing how a shared laugh can bring two people together. Well done!