Apologies

The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem "Apologies" presents an emotionally charged narrative that is relatable to many readers. The themes of misunderstanding, communication, and internal struggle are effectively conveyed through the use of simple, direct language.

However, the poem could benefit from a more consistent rhythm or meter to enhance its musicality. For instance, the second stanza has a different rhythm compared to the first and third stanzas. Establishing a consistent rhythm could improve the flow and readability of the poem.

Additionally, the use of imagery could be expanded to create a more vivid and engaging experience for the reader. While the phrase "The struggle within, pulling me apart again" effectively conveys a sense of internal conflict, incorporating more concrete images or metaphors could deepen the reader's understanding and emotional connection to this struggle.

The poem could also benefit from a more developed exploration of its themes. While the themes of misunderstanding and internal struggle are introduced, they are not fully explored or resolved. Providing more context or elaboration could add depth and complexity to the poem's narrative.

Lastly, the poem's title, "Apologies," suggests a tone of regret or contrition, but this tone is not clearly reflected in the poem itself. Revisiting the title to ensure it accurately reflects the poem's content and tone could improve its overall coherence and impact.

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that this is a poem, but I do understand the sentiment. Sometimes, it is very hard to remain quiet, when you don't know what speaking out will do. You get stars just for the thought. ~ Geez.
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Hello, Carrie,
I have read and reread this several times. I believe it is so thought-provoking. May I play with it a bit to show you how it speaks to me using only the first two lines?

I was only looking out
the best I could,

to those of you
who misunderstood.

An apology with a bit of flare. Maybe not what you were going for, but this still makes me pause and think. Really like the title.
Thank you!
L

ouch...I know this feeling so very well. I am glad that you published this.

*hugs, Cat