On the phone she tells me
she looks forward to the rain.
She mentions that she forgot her umbrella
again, but she’ll be okay without it.
And would I be kind enough to bring in her book
left outside on the table. Fretting in jest
that the author may not forgive if I don’t hurry,
and refuse her the denouement she hopes for.
I wonder, once more, if it’s forgetfulness.
Does she worry I’ll think she’s foolish or laughable
because she’s neglected to bring an umbrella again?
It’s not any of that. I can hear it in her voice
as she’s walking in the downpour;
the rain chasing away the blue of her black.
Obviously, I remind myself,
it’s not about forgetfulness at all.
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Shelter in the Rain
Hello, Michael,
"...the rain chasing away the blue of her black." I love your poetry! Another tender poem.
Thank you,
L
A couple typos, I believe: Denouncement and It's not any of that...
Thanks L! Always appreciate
Thanks L! Always appreciate you stopping by. Not sure I follow your comments about the typos. Denouement seems to be the correct word, as it means the final resolution of a literary work - i.e. the book referered to in the stanza. Curious also about what you saw wrong with "It's not any of that." Hope the new year is off to a good start for you and yours!
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Hello, Michael,
I'm so sorry! I was not familiar with the word denouement...resolution! Always grateful to learn something new!
I believe the "It's" is missing a "t".
Thank you for your wonderful poetry...and your literary knowledge!
L
Thanks L! Missed that typo,
Thanks L! Missed that typo, for sure!
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wonderful!!
this poem is utterly delightful. i enjoyed reading it so much i went back and read it again. thank you so much for sharing!!
Thanks for the kind words MM!
Thanks for the kind words MM!
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