Michael Anthony
Michael Anthony
Nov 19, 2023

Bodega Bay

The coffee maker is sounding
its’ morning music in late November.
Without mercy, always the hardest
working appliance when we are here.

A grey and overcast sea our frequent companion;
considered through rain-spattered windows
from hit-and-run squalls at first light.

The shorebirds, restless and racing
the foaming surf back and forth.
Familiar friends we will visit soon enough.

The receding surf along the shore
leaves a vivid mirror on the sand
providing time enough for reflection.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Direction: What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Region, Country: San Francisco Bay Area - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Bukowski

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Comments

Geezer

of the crew of a fishing boat, making ready to cast off and throw the nets. Maybe not what you intended, but what I saw. Nicely done. ~ Geez.
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T

Absolutely Loved the beginning so relatable:) I m sure those that live by the sea also connect with the sea reflection and reference

Lavender

Hello, Michael,
I looked up images of Bodega Bay - stunning! And your poem adds a personal feeling to your surroundings. "The coffee maker is sounding its morning music in late November..." I can hear it brewing and smell the awakening fragrance! Ready to start a beautiful day.
Thank you!
L