A light here to stay
Within my soul every day
Showing me the way
Nov 18, 2023
Hope (rhyming haiku)
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
A light here to stay
Within my soul every day
Showing me the way
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Simple
Yet says a lot. I really like Haiku and I like how yours rhymes. Well done.
Thank you Rose, I appreciate
Thank you Rose, I appreciate your reading and your comments.
PS: love your poems
Thanks Clentin
I always appreciate your feedback
Nice
Just a few words and so illuminating
Thank you for your comments.
Thank you for your comments. I appreciate it very much
Yes I know that there is no
Yes I know that there is no real form of rhyming haiku. I just wanted to try rhyming my poem.
Thank you for your comments.
Thanks
Thanks