Another visit

The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

Title: Another Visit

Review:

The poem "Another Visit" captures a moment of encounter with death, presenting a brief and contemplative scene. The imagery of death stopping by the window and peering in creates a sense of intrigue and mystery. However, there are a few areas where the poem could be further developed to enhance its impact.

Firstly, the poem could benefit from more precise and vivid language. For example, instead of using the phrase "landing on the sill," consider using a more evocative verb that conveys a sense of purpose or intention. This would help to create a stronger visual image for the reader.

Additionally, the poem raises interesting questions about the nature of death and its potential consequences. However, these questions are left unanswered, leaving the reader with a sense of ambiguity. Consider expanding on the idea of death planting a seed and explore the potential symbolism of black roses. This would provide the reader with a deeper understanding of the poem's themes and add layers of meaning.

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in the form of a raven or a crow?
Many people think that the raven or crow is a harbinger of death when in reality they are Odin's messengers and spies.
Many other cultures see the crow as a trickster. I like this, good to see you back writing, I've missed your stuff.
Nice take on The Grim Reaper. ~ Geezer.
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Hello, Richard,
You've captured so much with this brief poem. Fleeting thoughts that give pause. I am intrigued with the title as to using " Another" - not "A" or "The." Adds so much mystery. Really like this.
Thank you,
L

more in this piece each time I read it! ~ Geezer.
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