Hot Summer Nights

The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

This poem effectively uses vivid imagery and sensory details to create an intense atmosphere of passion and intimacy. However, there are a few areas where the poem could be improved.

Firstly, the poem could benefit from more consistent use of punctuation. For example, in the line "Breath on breath; my favorite aphrodisiac" the semicolon seems to be used as a pause, but in other lines, there is no punctuation to indicate a pause. Consistent punctuation can help guide the reader through the poem and create a more rhythmic reading experience.

Secondly, the poem could be more effective if it explored the tension between the "wrong" and the "beautifully right" in more depth. This is a compelling theme, but it is only briefly touched upon in the poem. Expanding on this could add more layers to the poem and make it more emotionally resonant.

Lastly, the line "The woman in me, honoring the man in him" could be interpreted in various ways, and it might be beneficial to clarify what is meant by this. Is it about gender roles, mutual respect, or something else? Providing more context could help the reader better understand the poem's message.

Overall, this poem has a strong foundation and with some refinement, it could be even more powerful.

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definitely hot. Steamy and slick. ~ Geez.
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Love the "sacred spot in the park" - it makes all the hot, steaminess really stand out!
Really like this!
L

Great poem, one really can feel the the effect of a “hot steamy night”