Alan Garfoot
Alan Garfoot
Jul 14, 2023
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Divine Introspection

As the essences of Chi align the Phrana energies emerge,
Then the Aura manifests as the souls Chakras converge,
And as our will gazes introspectively at its true nature,
The spirit connects skywards towards the infinite creator.

Then as Gaia's Lay-Line forces glow from below to above,
They resonate in our higher self the feelings of true love,
And as the high-sun illuminates your spirit in its golden beams,
Your higher power is reconnected to your hopes and your dreams.

Healed and empowered by the glory of living your inspirations,
As all true souls are borne of the energy and essence of creation,
For the 'DMT' and 'Pineal Gland' 'Soul Nexus' reveals our past lives,
Then connecting the higher self energies to the soul matrix inside.

Then through interstellar ascension we connect to the solar soul,
Harmonising the vibration of our essence to the macro-cosmic whole,
The infinite sentient wavelength captured in soul-glow spectrum,
A split-second of spiritual perfection in a moment of divine introspection.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Direction: How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - draft

About the Author

Region, Country: England, UK

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The poem "Divine Introspection" explores themes of spirituality, energy, and self-reflection. The language used is rich in metaphysical concepts and imagery. Here are some suggestions for further refining and strengthening the poem:

1. Clarity and Coherence: While the poem contains a wealth of metaphysical ideas, it could benefit from clearer connections between these concepts. Consider revisiting the structure and organization of the poem to ensure a smoother flow of ideas. This will help readers follow the progression of thought more easily.

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3. Consistency in Tone: The poem shifts between a more abstract, philosophical tone and a more personal, introspective tone. Strive for consistency in the overall tone and voice to maintain a cohesive atmosphere throughout the poem.

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Lavender

Hello, Alan,
Welcome to Neopoet. Your first entry is very intriguing and informative. I searched the internet for quite a bit of your terminology. Interesting thoughts and concepts. I look forward to reading more of your work as I'm sure these concepts affect your poetry.
Thank you!
Lavender