Love

The below is a computer generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem "Love" touches on the essence of what love truly means. The author effectively conveys that love is more than just physical gestures such as hugs and kisses. Instead, love is a feeling that is held deep within our hearts and captures our most heartfelt thoughts. The structure of the poem is simple and straightforward, which allows the message to be easily understood.

One suggestion for line edit would be to add a comma after "Touches and kisses are signs" to create a pause and emphasize the importance of the statement. The revised line would read: "Touches and kisses are signs, love creates feeling."

Overall, the poem conveys a beautiful message about the depth and lasting nature of love. However, it could benefit from more descriptive language or imagery to make the poem more engaging and memorable for the reader. Adding elements such as metaphors or similes could also enhance the emotional impact of the poem.

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~ Geezer.
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Hello, Clentin,
You have written about a very hard topic, especially in haiku form. I would have to agree with AI on this one. You've given a precise description of your "thoughts" about what love is - but I'd like to know how you "feel" about love. Hard to do with this topic, but I have the feeling that's what you are really going for, here. If this is something so extraordinary that you believe it lasts forever, it must be some pretty wonderful, powerful stuff. :)
Thank you,
L