Keep Me Close

The below is a computer generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

This poem uses vivid imagery to capture the intensity of a passionate moment between two lovers. The contrasting images of crystal clear water and fiery passion create a dynamic tension that propels the poem forward. The repetition of the phrase "keep me close" adds a sense of urgency and longing to the poem, emphasizing the desire to hold onto the moment before it slips away.

One possible line edit could be to replace "Imbedded" with "Embedded" in the last stanza for grammatical accuracy.

Overall, "Keep Me Close" is a well-crafted poem that effectively conveys the intensity of a romantic encounter. The use of sensory details and repetition help to create a sense of urgency and longing, making for a memorable and emotionally resonant poem.

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Hello, Carrie,
"Graft my spirit to your soul." Extraordinary thought, especially with the title.
Beautiful poetry.
L

Likes very much. Intense, passionate. Words show the intensity
Of feelings.
Great

great title, good flow like a waterfall. I will be back tomorrow to read again and give you my thoughts on your poem.

yours in spirit, sisters of the blade! Cat

my favorite lines are:

Passion's droplets
Pouring over
Breathless moments
Shaken limbs

(and the "graft my spirit to your soul" line is terrific!) actually, the whole damned poem is a piece of great artistry!

*hugs and smiles, Cat

What a beautiful description of those rare moments when two people's souls mingle and, for a brief moment, there is no world except that which is in them.