Grace

With words so deftly woven,
This poem takes flight like a bird in motion.
The use of repetition is a powerful device,
Creating a sense of urgency, a call to rise.

The image of claws may seem harsh at first,
But it's a symbol of strength, not meant to hurt.
And when truth is finally revealed,
The monster in us all can be healed.

One suggestion I'd make to enhance this piece,
Is to consider a slight tweak to the second line, at least.
Perhaps "Mend my heart" instead of "Mend my break",
To give more depth to the pain that's at stake.

Overall, this is a beautifully crafted work,
Full of emotion and power, leaving us all in awe and lurk.
The grace within these stanzas is clear to see,
A testament to the poet's skill and creativity.

Well- wrought poetry!
Nice job here!
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I interpreted this as the author not being afraid to confront one of his demons..feels like a mother or mother figure...while you are willing to ask for acceptance, you aren't afraid to call this person out and fight them. I went through a similar battle not too long ago. Well done.