Hospice

Care issued daily
Giving a final prayer
With Family’s love

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A good piece...

describing at home care for the critically ill. I think everyone would want a caretaker like described. Someone who takes care of the patient with love and respect. BTW, [Hospice] ~ Geezer.
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Thank you. In life we will or

Thank you. In life we will or already have experienced the last days if those we loved

Thank you for your comments.

Thank you for your comments. I am not an experienced poem writer. You mentioned to eliminate the caps in the poem.
What us the correct capitalisation for poems?
Thank you

Hospice

Hello, Clentin,
Anyone familiar with hospice care understands how your words could be so brief, yet hold so much. I find them to be healing. Very tender.
L

Thank you Lavender for

Thank you Lavender for reading my poems and for your comments

caps what caps bare head

care issued daily
giving a final prayer
with family’s love...

see no caps and s in title could be changed to c
hospice...

''hope only speaks politely in cell eventually...''

this could be taken as acrostic

Thank you

Thank you
C is right.thanks again!
Late at night not all is right!
I hit wrong key

Thank you

Thank you
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