lovedly
lovedly
Mar 14, 2023

Dads Love

Yeah my dad loved me
gave away all he had
to other greedy siblings...

left me a life long memory
he comes to me daily
six decades since
kisses me

About This Poem

Last Few Words: A life long dads memory

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

Lavender

Hello, Lovedly,
I get a mixture of feelings here, but a sweet reflection, too.
Lav

lovedly

After posting this small poem my dad came in my dream
He said ''Don't worry...WAIT AND SEE...ENJOY LIFE... ONE DAY IT WILL RAIN GOLD FOR THEE..See my picture this ...But you can't download it ..Be brave as always''
Grand message he is still out there somewhere..... Lav waiting for me .
But I am in no hurry my family is right here with me

C

Good poem. I sense that your siblings seemed to got more response from your father, he seems to be always with you even after his oassing