Aching

The first verse is so well put and succinct that it is enough to make the reader alert to the pain of loss and fear of new commitment. The remainder of the poem says here I am like a trembling faun about to take first steps.

Very well thought out poem, incredibly raw and yet with the promise of new life.

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Hannah

I saw the title. I saw you were the author and I already knew how good this was going to be. In fact, you may make the occasional reader tremble with this one.

Tim

I have nothing to say critque wise. There is nothing to correct.

This is pure poetry, written from that place inside we hide our secrets. Beautifully done.

Brava!

Kindest Regards Jayne x

as though I have intruded upon a private moment, between you and another. One of those times when you see two people and for them, there is no one else for a hundred miles around, and you know... It may not be right, and it will never happen,
or they have just discovered each other. But you know. This is one of those times. ~ Geez.
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As always and so true. Teaching ourselves to love again after a serious heartbreak is challenging. You captured the moment perfectly.

I can experience your pain in this poem. Very well done

Oh, Well done! L.
These type of poems stay with me for a long-while,
again, bravo.

Obi.