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Mar 10, 2023

Final Handshake

A few sermons said
he couldn't have recorded

draped in military colors
and saluted
suddenly recalled was a soldier
wanted to get up
but was nailed

taken to the crematorium
slid into an incinerator
nearest kith and kin
his spouse
silently wept

God let's shake hands
so far I had kept him
now you take over
as you are of heaven
the only single owner

I'm awaiting your tenancy
until then will pray feverishly

Lord we all have come to thank
Yes we know
you only can see

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Path to eternity...

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Geezer

from your usual. Maybe there is something you've been holding back?
~ Geez.
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lovedly

On Medical advice after VIRAL VERTIGO my splst told me to avoid going to grief paces
Three days ago I just had to
COMPOSED this visual poem in my mind No tears at all
So I posted it now ....
Different yes AT 83 one has seen the whole world via different spectrum ....Perhaps.. this may just be a sample.Thanks for spotting it ...Dear friend Geez