Smiles

A look that moves lips
Shows bright teeth gleaming inside
Changing how we feel??

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Eastern

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: USA Pennsylvania, USA

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Smiles

Hello, Clentin,
I read this lovely poem two wonderful ways: someone is looking at the subject, causing them to smile and change their feelings, or the subject is smiling at someone and causing that person to change their feelings. Either way, giving and receiving smiles really does spread positive feelings.
Thank you!
L

Thank you for reading and

Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem. I found that smiling changes my feelings but at the same time also affects other and their feelings.
Thank you