lovedly
lovedly
Mar 03, 2023

I Can Now Hear Him

Honey voice of god
from veiled curtains
heavenly clouds

God also smiles for me
as I see and hear
the unknown being
where is God
still tell me

anybody!!!

About This Poem

Last Few Words: God visited me last night Ah not in imagery....

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

Geezer

The big man himself? I hope that you are not due for a transfer! I wouldn't want to have to translate from angel-speak, when I read your work. ~ Geez.
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lovedly

get a column fitted where we all can see how many have read me else am I writing only for me Yes I'm not as dull as you perceive we r aged blokes experienced and all spent ....few comments are but natural
Tell Paul all sights show ....how many have read blokes like me
hehehe
Geeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Geezer

you remind me of those people that I get friend requests from. They say I have thousands of friends on F.B. why won't you friend me? I don't have much in common with any of them. The only thing I can think of is that they know someone that I know. They just want to rack up thousands of friends to say, "I have thousands of friends." I am not interested in them. I don't answer them. I don't think that it is in the cards for this site, to have a reader count. I may be wrong, and it may appear, but I do believe that [Andy] who does the upgrades in more interested in keeping the site moving and accurate. ~ Geez.
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lovedly

good nite Gee remain friendly with me need not comment I know u know when to treat me like a football like did jess so thanks Good morning////night...which ever

Geezer

I love about you lovedly, you always remain calm, cool and collected. I am always your friend. Like my wife says if I fear she is mad with me. I ask; "Do you still love me?" and she will reply, "Don't ask me now." LoL ~ Geez.
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Seren

Seren

2 years 1 month ago

I read the poem so short and it was well told and then I read your last few words. I'm not sure what to think after our conversation on your other poem. I'm a little confused and gobsmacked. Or I'd that God-smacked.

It's a nice poem and I think it's well constructed and I find nothing to critique.

Love Sis xxx

lovedly

snap poem was just staring into the darkness
blank
I heard a murmur
was it my heart!