Wicked

Tempter
Wicked waters
Drag me down underneath
Moral compass shattered wholely
Charmer

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Cinquain

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: United States

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allan Poe

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Comments

Hmmmm...

Thoughts alone, do not make for sins.
I guess that moral compasses, are sometimes affected by magnetic personalities.
A nicely done Cinquain. ~ Geez.
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Truth

Sometimes those magnets temporarily erase all that is right and wrong and leave desire, longing and a need to be loved. Thank you for the read and comment.

Wicked

Hi, Carrie,
Really like this!

Thank you,
L

Thank you

Cinquain is my new favorite! I'm going to explore some other styles soon.