Indivisible_Origin
Indivisible_Origin
Feb 27, 2023

Wraith

Yesterday
Trust was a wet fish
Nearly dead and dinner
Contorting to breathe
In a world without water

Tonight
I’m a wraith
between worlds
Seeking solace
Visage vague
Feeling familiar

Tomorrow
I’m details
Diligence due
Pacing steps left
by lesser men
Unspun yarn
rotting in the loom

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Not actively editing

About the Author

Region, Country: Louisiana US, USA

Favorite Poets: Ocean Vuong

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Comments

Lavender

Good morning, Poet,
The sense of uncertainty of self, purpose, perhaps place in a demanding, but still lonely world - both on a personal level, and universally. Beautiful alliteration throughout. Strong title that equals your final line.
L

Abby

Abby

2 years 1 month ago

This poem feels really strong to me. The consistent use of metaphor and personification of trust. I think, also, the language flows really nicely. And I enjoyed how each stanza was a different time frame, good idea.