Sadness I do feel
Greater than an open wound
When a loved one leaves
Feb 26, 2023
Grief
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Sadness I do feel
Greater than an open wound
When a loved one leaves
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
hello and good morning to you,
you always have something worthwhile to say. I admire that!
*hugs, Cat
Thank you.
Thank you.
My last poem Apple Pie was an attempt at a 10 line poem starting with one syllable.
I like haikus
Dear Clentin
I felt this poem as well as absorbed it. I lost my Dad nearly 10mths ago and the grief is ever present for me, still. It has been the hardest time I've had since my Mum passed. Your poetry is like an opening flower. Blooming.
Kind regards Jayne
Thank you. You are right,
Thank you. You are right, nothing is worse than losing a family member
Grief
Hello, Clentin,
So acutely descriptive - "greater than an open wound." I feel the sincerity of your title.
Thank you,
L
Grief
The many stages of grief...but "greater than an open wound" surely sums it up for me. A beautiful, short write that says so much.