Seren
Seren
Feb 21, 2023

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A symphony
of prayer
touches my mind
in the peace
of whispered words
I soothe my heart

some are imprinted
without thought
as filigreed light
warms my soul,
they slip out
as adoration sung
from the heart

in these moments
of reverence
and love
where no pain
can burn
or malice survive

I come as close to heaven
as I can bear to be

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Beyond the Black Stump..Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda

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Comments

Lavender

Hello, Jayne,
A beautiful capture of what feels like, to me, a divine phenomenal moment.
L

Seren

To say it was profound is an understatement. Thanks so much for reading this one I'm really not sure what to call it.

Thank you for your insight!

Love J x

Lavender

Maybe there are no words that fit a suitable title for such a glorious experience...
My heart overflows from this.
Lxx

Leslie

I loved this also, because it reveals the nature of the HUMAN heart, without compromising the acceptance of divinity!
I feel to say that the poetry that I've read has all been exceptional. This is a fun and safe place to work my feelings out
in a positive way! This is beautiful!

Leslie

I loved this also, because it reveals the nature of the HUMAN heart, without compromising the acceptance of divinity!
I feel to say that the poetry that I've read has all been exceptional. This is a fun and safe place to work my feelings out
in a positive way! This is beautiful!

Leslie

I loved this also, because it reveals the nature of the HUMAN heart, without compromising the acceptance of divinity!
I feel to say that the poetry that I've read has all been exceptional. This is a fun and safe place to work my feelings out
in a positive way! This is beautiful!

Seren

I am glad you're feeling comfortable here it should be a place you can come and feel safe to reveal self without fear of anything, I really appreciate your comment I am glad you found something in this to connect to.

Kind Regards Seren

Geezer

like this, one might tend to fall back upon the prayers learned by rote, and somehow retained over years of disuse. A magical moment, captured! ~ Love and higgest bugs, Geez.
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Seren

Thanks so much these are moments that are treasured and always tucked into that pocket of memories.

thanks so much for the read and the insight they're always appreciated!

Love and higgliest bugs Sis xox

Seren

I am really glad you liked those lines they're also important to me and are the heart of this poem.

thanks for the lovely comment I really appreciate it!

Jayne xxx

Seren

Thank you so much if it brought you peace in any sense or gave you a moment of rest, well, that's why I wrote this one it attempts to describe the indescribable.

Thanks so much for the read its always appreciated.

Hugs Jayne xxx

RoseBlack

Another brilliant piece! These spiritual moments are so incredible and precious. You did a wonderful job of capturing the feel of that moment.

Seren

If I conveyed in anyway the moment, I have shared more than anyone could realise. Thank you so much for your thoughts and the read its always appreciated!

Love and biggest hugs Jayne