READ ICU ONE FIRST THEN SECOND

I C U SECOND
I just heard docs silently whisper
Coma
now nothing one can do
but
shift her to the
QUEUE
in the ward
as just another one
richest
lady once...

what a decision
not even a private room

Alas
''There is no cure for Birth and Death but to enjoy the interval...''
so spoke my spouse.....''
Gasp!!!

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Final results expected by tomorrow or Sunday Wait and C

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

Comments

Bro

Unfortunately, that's the times we live in, well done I think they go well together!!

You're really writing some good poems.

hugs and love Sis

''I am thinking of coming out with a ''SOUVENIR 23 BEST POEMS ''
You have read ...mostly Can you suggest which would meet the criteria
NEOS all who read me sincerely
will get a free book from me
ere .....you know
I too go.............
lol yet

Smiles

Why 23?

hugs Sis

out of over 30*** grand

23 would do
Costly affair publishing is you know
poor man
Can an AUSSIE pub be found
I wonder sis

Second ICU

Hello, Lovedly,
So sorry to hear this about your dear friend.
Lav

Life needs to

move on Can't help it Can we?

ICU ONE FIRST THEN SECOND

SCARY STUFF NO DOUBT. THIS IS A VERY INTERESTING SITUATION WE ALL MAY WILL PROBABLY END UP ON BOTH SIDES OF THE STICK. I ENJOYED THE CREATIVE USE OF WORDS THE RHYTHYM AND PUNCUATION!