Clentin
Feb 21, 2023
This poem is part of the contest:

Neopoem Of The Week February 19th to February 25th 2023

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Beauty

Beauty exists in many places
More than In our babies faces

Sometimes a thought we embrace
And a dress full of lace

A kiss from my wife
Or simply life

Loveliness
Finesse

Grace

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: USA Pennsylvania, USA

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Lavender

Hello, Clentin,
I believe this to be a Nonet? So delicate and beautiful, and full of gratitude. If it is a Nonet, I think the first line has one too many syllables. Perhaps remove "so"?
Thank you!
L

C

Thank you

I thought I had 9 syllables?
I will recheck.
Is this officially called a Nonet.

Thanks, I will edit

C

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Rosewood Apothecary

I fall into the same rhythms a lot. Stuff like this is a great exercise. In this case it’s got a touching subject and that makes for a sweet reading poem

Tim

Leslie

THIS IS SIMPLE BUT SO BEAUTIFUL. IT INVOKES THE PUREST EMOTIONS!

RoseBlack

Great job on the format and the meaning of the poem! If only everyone could step back and find beauty in even the smallest things, I think there would be much more happiness in the world.