Clouds move by too fast
Exposing light and brightness
Creating warmth below
Feb 20, 2023
Sunshine
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Not actively editing
Clouds move by too fast
Exposing light and brightness
Creating warmth below
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Not actively editing
Comments
Dear Clentin
Another cracking three-line poem, I am so taken with this one I see the clouds moving past and the suns heat warming my face in those minuscule moments. Here in Australia in the summer the heat is there clouds or no. but in the winter, this is the how it is where I live which is classed as sub-tropical.
At the moment its 11pm and the heat is incredible tonight.
I went totally off topic I apologise your poem took me away.
Kindest Regards Seren
Thank you. I am trying to
Thank you. I am trying to write a haiku or similar poems with different ideas, nature as well as other
Types of feeling.
der Clentin,
nicely done! btw, did you get the p.m. I sent you yesterday? I hope it helped you.
*hugs, Cat
Thank you. I did get your
Thank you. I did get your email. I am trying to figure out how to use this site
I like this better than the last
I think this one strengthens the last though. Being that they’re meant to be related I think that I’ll go back and check that last one.
Tim