Neopoem Of The Week February 19th to February 25th 2023

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Good Morning

Good morning, I say
As I stretch the sidewalk
Making room for strangers to walk through my day
Leaving but footprints in their wake

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

Region, Country: USA - Georgia, USA

Favorite Poets: Lord Alfred Tennyson

Thanks so much!

I like the way you think!

*hugs, Cat

Thank you very much!

I see my old cat stretching himself over the pavement in the winter sun, I'm probably totally off, but this is an excellent short poem.

I see nothing I would change or edit.

Well done!!

kind regards Seren

Interpretation is always up to the reader. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Exactly, it's the perfection and beauty of poetry it can take us all to different places and times and dimensions.

kindest Regards Seren

Perfectly said.

I love simple observations turned poetry. Love this.

Tim

Thank you very much!!

Simply beautiful in all its implications. Feel free to message me if you feel comfortable.

Thank you so much, Leslie!