Sour taste of defeat
An inescapable truth
Is born from wisdom
Feb 12, 2023
Vindictiveness...
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Eastern
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How does this theme appeal to you?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Brilliant
Three lines...says so much....well done...I may need to try a Haiku.
dear geezer,
so very true!
*hugs, Cat
Dearest Bro
Wow, this says a thousand things in only three lines, I think it's a brilliant Haiku!
Bravo!!!!
I really think this is one of your best-est Haiku. Nice Grammer huh? lol
love and higgliest bugs Sis xox
Hmmm
Hmmm… let me think
Tim
Xox
Xox
Thank you so much...
It's always so nice to hear from you. I liked yours too, as you can tell. ~ Geezer.
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