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lovedly
Feb 11, 2023

Peace Come Over

There is really no peace
while living
we live piece by piece
till we are on our way to heaven

that alone is heavenly grace
on mommy Earth
to live silently a life of beauty
one must as ought to continue to play
in a heavenly way
so try not to dismay

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

Seren

Seren

2 years 2 months ago

I really love this snippet of a poem I think you're only getting better, and it seems like you're growing at a rapid rate,

I only have one suggestion, Mommy Earth? I'd write Mother Earth.

I know you have your own way with words and if you don't like my suggestion that's totally OK.

Love and big hugs Sis xox