lovedly
lovedly
Feb 08, 2023

My new world is Cold

Cool it!
I introduced..
cold wine too

you enjoy more
when it's chilled
and
you look for warmth
in a sexy blanket
could do after drinks cold
but not few

then both of you can do
what you want to

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Seren

Seren

2 years 2 months ago

That first lines not working for me but it could only be my sleep deprived mind.

I'd have it like this

Cool it!
I introduced...

Then the rest of the poem, my oh my never too old eh my friend wink lol

Love ya Sis xox

lovedly

Have you ever realized since 11years
I've always listened to you and Jess
Thus I am a shadow of two....
old sincere but abs
TRUE
now mainly
GEE and YOU....
So I constantly thank you
May you
''shine too...''
as I once
''shone ''
owing to you
two

Poets Hand

Does the title reflect the wine or the mood? It is up to the reader to fathom. Warmed up in a blanket not cool; but then "after drinks cold but not few". Then do what you want to do.
This is an invitation to share a time with someone wrapped in a blanket with a cold wine or two.

I'll be in that! A great poem straight forward and well thought out.
Poets Hand
Hannah