Some Other Time

Some other time
my eyes are freshly wet
do await some more time

I now no more can mime
it's late in the night
need more time

sleep over powers me
let the dawn rise
and overnight
I will become
may be wise

may be not
if comes early my demise
then my soul shall rise

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

It’s like the childhood bedtime prayer except all dressed up in Lovedly fabric.

I like it,
Tim

As you traverse my way
I sleep nude
as and when
childhood spent
now no lament

loved's
amen
lovedly
has no repent

make sure you at least cover yourself before inviting us to come visit you in the night! LoL
~ Geez.
.

GEE
NOTHING
Will you see

This holds the sadness of being

Love Sis xox

over body soul and mind
== to ADHD kind
never mind

we ain't here for endless time
we must ourselves
daily remind

good comments
heaven sent
Amen