lovedly
lovedly
Jan 29, 2023

Beautiful Eyes

There's beauty
in each one's eyes
so we see differently

to ensure
we don't dwell

in an indifferent
mundane world

we all are beautiful
humans
animals
birds
and
bees

About This Poem

Last Few Words: All eyes are beautiful

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

Triskelion

I wish that we could be a bee
A fuzzy wuzzy bumblebee
A buzzing bumbling bee we be
A-buzzing 'round a basswood tree

He-hee!

Thomas

Triskelion

We could see a lot more beauty...may be why bees are attracted by flowers. Now write a poem about flowers and bees.
Please.

Thomas

S

Try it using each one's eyes instead of eye. Even an insect with compound vision has 2 eyes lol

Lavender

Hello, Lovedly,
I agree with Stan - plural eyes in the second line, especially to go along with your title. So glad to look at the world through your inspiring poem and your "Beautiful Eyes."
Thank you!
Lav

Seren

Seren

2 years 2 months ago

I agree with all the above suggestions.

I think you could've expanded this made your poems world bigger.

I see you've changed that second line.

Well done.

Love and hugs Sis xxx