RoseBlack

Jan 26, 2023

Hybrid

Skin like snow
Amber eyes of fire
Vermillion velvet lips
Gnarled by opalescent fangs

Ivory talons
That snatch in the night
Drinking blood from her victims
A gorey sight

Howling at the moon
She cried out in vain
A mix of confusion and purpose
Hybrid is her name

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: United States

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allan Poe

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Comments

Thanks Kat

The wheels are spinning....a mix of lycan and vampire poems...perhaps my own book...

Thanks Mark

These are fun to write

Minotaurs

What of those? Any in your repertoire? I wrote of one once ages ago. I'm a fan of your work.

Hello

I have not written about minotaurs. I'm am more into Lycans and vampires. I am glad you like my work.

Are you doing a series

It sounds like a continuation from yesterday. You should come up with a story. Do a little chapbook, with your sketches.

Might be cool
Tim

I was considering

A series.. I like the whole lycan and vampire concept...even before the Underworld became popular. I am not sure how well I can do with the artwork but it would be fun to try...great idea. thank you!

dear Carrie,

I think you should do it! it's genius!

*ever, eddy & cat

Thanks Cat

I will give it a try

“…it would be fun to try.”

Then do it silly. Lol

It's the drawings

I'm not sure about. I primarily do faces.

Hybrid

I like it Rose. Alex

Thanks Alex

Glad you enjoyed

Dear Carrie

I loved the carry on from Wolf Moon. I really think it's a great poem.

Looking forward to the rest of your series.

Brava!!!

Love & hugs Jayne xxx

Thanks Jayne

More to come...Lycans don't need a full moon to shapeshift.

Hybrid

Hello, Carrie,
This seems to flow as a natural realm for you - great writing!
L

Thank you L

It really does!!! More to come