lovedly
lovedly
Jan 24, 2023

Your Poetry is My Muse Hope you are Amused

Have you ever noticed
animals behave better than many human

smaller animals
from oceans to seas to land
evolved
till all culminated
as a monkey

have you ever noticed
monkeys were
the first one to peel
a banana
then man learned it too
how lovely is the feeling
of peeling

monkeys bestowed to you
have shared 94 percent
of their genes

man is asking
how much longer they will take
to share the balance

so till then let's lay
shake and merry make
eat lovely pastries and cake
yes you bake

lovely muse yours ...friendly
poetree
be more at it
peel bit by bit

About This Poem

Last Few Words: If you read this slowly you will feel it sensuously ...

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

Geezer

the sensuous feeling you said I would get, [and I really wanted it], it just made me hungry, with that talk about bananas and trees, all that I could see in mind's eye, was me lying in the crotch of a tree, peeling bananas and eating them. I had to go get a little more breakfast. ~ Geez.
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Triskelion

I didn't realize you're supposed to peel a banana before you eat it....guess I need to go to the zoo more often.
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Hmmm. I wonder if I can do that propeller thing the hippopotamus' do...I guess I should start growing a tail now?

Thomas

Triskelion

..lovedly...do you ever sleep?

Thomas

Triskelion

got home from work 6 sips of triple sec ago. The zoo is closed, so I'll have to surf more education from the animal documentaries...think I'll check out the amarula tree vids...purely educational of course

Thomas