We, like mushrooms of the
Field, develop strong fiber
With the light of dawn
Fortified by hopeful rays
Of the new day’s sun
Staunch enough to endure
The biting of teeth chewing
At its tender stem
Yet too fragile to bear
The weight of night’s awesome
Boot.
Jan 13, 2023
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Comments
hello Clentin,
very interesting. I would like to read more.
*hugs, Cat
Thank you.
Thank you.
I am trying to write more. I hope to create some more poems.
I think that with age one
I think that with age one looks over the past while anticipating the future. Hoping to improve as time moves on.
dear Clentin,
i think that is a very good outlook on things. good luck,
*hugs, Cat