lovedly
lovedly
Jan 23, 2023

Fun Reel Humor

Four fellows went
invitation by heaven sent
we lived like neighbors
hi and bye
never a word beyond that

now all say hurry
the four have gone away

the queue is going shorter
don't miss your chance
no other neighbors may miss you then
when at the end of the queue you plan to remain

left like a desert rat
no one with whom now to chat
the smaller cats will meow
how do you oldie expect
a kiss from me some how

About This Poem

Last Few Words: If only death we could accept it to happen glad we lived all along Four friends just passed a good bye for ever no hi or bye any further

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

Lavender

Hello, Lovedly,
It is a certainty, as your poem suggests, and you state so well that we should appreciate these moments we have now with more than a neighborly hello.
Thank you,
Lav

Seren

Seren

2 years 3 months ago

I don't know of who you write but I can make a guess. It matters not. This is a lovely poem. Written with a yearning for old friends.

You've come so far dear one.

I'm so proud of you.

Love Always Jayne-Chloe xxx

Seren

Seren

2 years 3 months ago

I'm halfway done. Will message you when I post it

Hugs Jayne xxx