Poison words
Flowing from your tongue
My name must taste good
In every song you've sung
Pull a dagger, Bitch
Then I'll pull a sword
The time has come
You're not the adored
Hide and seek
A little too late
No one likes ugly
Time to meet fate
Run, run
As fast as you can
Don't worry, I'll catch you
I'm the bitchilante hitman
Comments
Dear RoseBlack
Well I promise not to piss you off. This has venom and it's really well written. I wrote a poem called Judas Kiss it's here on the site I think. It's something like this. Well done. Your pen has a sting!!! I love it.
I can't see anything I'd change but I'm overtired I'll take another look when I come back this afternoon my time. Sun's up I've been up all night writing. It's all good I only get 3hrs sleep most nights.
Kind regards J x
P.s. I think that title is perfect.
Thank you
For your high praise! Writing is a release for me and I think I am learning how to structure it instead of letting it all spill out. I will check out your poem for sure! Thanks again.
dear Carrie,
you have honed the energy of your anger into a fine weapon that only fits your hand! I love it all!
*hugs, Cat
much enjoyed, eddy styx
Thank you Cat
Surprisingly this was not directed at a male....but it felt good to get off my chest!!! Thank you for your comment.
dear Carrie,
the who does not matter. the important thing is feeling good after blowing of steam ;) Cat
It was either that
Or a long car ride....I am glad I chose this.
dear Carrie,
I am glad you did too!
*hugs, Cat
me too, eddy
I hope I never cross you
I consider myself aptly warned. You know this is great. I’ll tell you anyway; this is great.
Tim
Thank you
Metal as fk right!!! I think I was almost growling at the end...it takes a lot to make my temper come out and this person hit the right nerve.
My new title
Thank you for the comment!!!
Job title
In italics under my name lol
Bitchilante hitman
My retirement career perhaps...glad you enjoyed