Whenever jess was annoyed at me
it was always Ian
who came to wipe my tears
always had held me in high esteem
he said wait for some time
he is in jungle boots
out to shoot
avoid him a while
just smile
You know now's my time
lilies are for mummies
do also include me ..
as a loving daddy
my young bard
you will just continue
to grow
by now all know
this small bard
has surfaced above the ocean
but the surf doesn't spare anyone
so one day soon enough
you'll come this way
Yes, I know my heart beat asks so
why do you want me to beat fast
how much more do you think
I shall last
so for yourself order lilies fast
'ere I finally blast
mid night past
Comments
Lovely Tata
This is a lament of times past. It makes me sad to know they aren't here anymore.
It's a comment poem. Have you ever thought? Instead of commenting these then posting as a poem? Save the comment for your poem and rewrite the comment. That was one of Jess's nags with you. Don't fall into bad habits. I won't yell at you or swear but I will push you to be better.
With love J x
SORRY
I will delete it
don't delete...
just think about it and rewrite it.
*hugs & love, Cat
No never delete! But if you
No never delete! But if you think a comment I'd good enough for a poem please copy it and rewrite the comment.
Hugs I know how you work never take a suggestion as criticism. I'll never swear at you but I will gently push you to be better Tata xxx
OK I am going back to sleep I woke up with this in my hand lol
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Thank you and Cats
will redo as advised
KIND
Thanks for liking my heart's beat running fastly
lol
Tata
A beautiful edit well done.
I'm chuffed and I know the elf would be too
Love J x
yeah thanks Seren
sound the Siren
lovedly desires to meet ye elf
fix the
RV