I am the emperor of my empire
‘his majesty, the king’
‘her majesty the Queen’
I am the warrior in my
Life's battle-field,
I am the twilight of my dawn
and my own sky star,
the illumination that
motivates me
and the motivation that
inspires
and when there's no one
to give me a push
I tell I
"push me".
Comments
dear Rula,
I love how it is all interconnected. a beautiful job!
*hugs, Cat
Thank you dearest Cat
It's been just a thought. I hope I don't sound like bragging or so. It's what the title of the contest inspires.
Thank you so much for reading and commenting dear
Self motivation should be the
Self motivation should be the only motivation.... and we all should give ourselves a little push at times
Thank you
Totally agree. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Nice flex
Astounding. I have some suggestions.
I am the emperor of my empire
the ‘his majesty, the king’
and ‘her majesty the Queen’
I am the warrior in my
Life's battle-field,
I am the twilight of my dawn
and my own sky star,
the (illumination) that
motivates me
and the motivation that
inspires
and when there's no one
to give me a push
I tell I
"push me".
That might strengthen a strong poem,
Stupendous,
Tim
Thank you Tim
For reading and the suggestion. I implemented as suggested.I’m happy you like my poem.
Push Me
Hello, Rula,
A great idea for this theme. Bold! I'm not certain "the" and "and" are necessary in the second and third lines, but I understand the reason for using them. A wonderful inspiring read!
L
I’ll second that
Good eyes. Or ears. Or mind’s ear I suppose. But yes, I’ll agree to that.
Dearest Lav and Tim
Always wonderful to hear from you .Your on spot suggestions are taken and implemented. Can’t thank you enough friends.