Love poetry skips me
now I see
but your poems
and that guy's doing it tonight
gives me an inspiration
about all bridal like nights
no beloved at night
no life
it's ones' birth right
to fall in love at first sight
smiles in the middle of the darkest night
yeah in the mid of any whispering night
for there's no orgasmic life
without a lovely pulsating night
surely lovers must be bright
ain't I absolutely right
how about tonight
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Lovely
"Love poetry skips me"
I'd change those first two lines to that.
Love loved lovedly lovely. I love this!
Bravo!!
You've always had it in you? Both of us knew it!!!
Love and biggest hugs J x
You make me feel like a bro
sis
Poetree me
I hope so. Hugs lovely x
I hope so.
Hugs lovely x
yes
of course sis aussie
Lovely!
This is absolutely fantastic!
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Thanks
Jack
Nice job
Always are you evolving without really changing fundamentally.
Good job
Tim
Kindness
Tim
Thanks evolution
like ''change ''
is permanent....
The cheeky guy posted a poem
How about doing it tonight
I replied to set him aright
He ran in plight
never came for another
night
when will the stalwarts poets of Neo
get enlightened
by my abstract poems
Never someone here does whispers
though deaf I can still hear