Lavender

Jan 16, 2023

Passing By

Time touches all as it passes by -
pages ripped from old calendars
battered shoes beneath the bed
red barns faded to gray
yellow photographs
wrinkled faces
empty fields
sunsets
lives
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About This Poem

Last Few Words: This form is called Nonet. It has nine lines - the first line containing nine syllables, the second containing eight and each following line decreasing a syllable until the last line is one syllable. Rhyming is optional, but since it is structured, I listed it as Western. Dunno 'bout that... L

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: United States

Favorite Poets: I tend to read Ted Kooser

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Comments

Hello, Kat!

I had never heard of it, either! Always something new to unwrap!
Thank you,
L

A wonderful

Nonet my friend. Great theme and very well excuted one!
I take off the hat for this little beauty.
Thanks for sharing dear!

Hello, Rula,

There's so much poetry out there, pretty exciting!
L

Nonet

Beautiful! The words and the form. I am enjoying all of these new concepts! Well done.

Hello, RoseBlack,

A bit of fun while stretching the imagination.
Thank you!
L

Lav

new style creative poem

Hello, Lovedly,

As always, I am thankful for you.
Lav

yes I know

as I'm also to Lav you

WOW

Beautiful artistic delivery! Thanks for the update. That's my first time of hearing such word: Nonet!
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Hello, Jackweb,

My first time, too! The shapes of poetry are endless!
L

I think I remember...

doing one of these long ago. It certainly is a challenge and may make a good contest some time. Nice job on this one! ~ Geez.
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Hello, Geezer,

It's pretty overwhelming how little I know about poetry. Always exciting to discover something shiny underneath a rock!
Thank you!
L

Sorry I’m late to the party

This is fantastic. Carry on poet!

Hello, Tim,

"...thanks, and thanks, and ever thanks!"
L

absolutely...

Inspired!!!

*hugs, Cat

Hello, Cat,

I sure appreciate your comment! There are so many styles, forms, ways to express poetry.
Thank you!
L

Liked the poem very much

Liked the poem very much
What form is this?

What is this form of poetry

What is this form of poetry called,
I loved your poem.

Hi, Clentin,

This is called a Nonet, which I had never heard of before and then wanted to try. Nine lines, first line starting with nine syllables and then each following line decreasing by one syllable until the last line is just one syllable long. Time diminishing seemed to be a good subject.
Thank you for reading!
L

Thanks for the info about

Thanks for the info about Nonet. I will try a poem or 2
Thanks again!