Jackweb
Jackweb
Jan 14, 2023

SOLITARY MOMENT

the lone wolf
falls prey to uncertainty
the fury of time

©® Onyinyechi Cosmos Etu

About This Poem

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Imo State - Republic of Biafra(Nigeria), NGA

Favorite Poets: Late Christopher Okigbo

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Comments

Rosewood Apothecary

This is really something else.

It might be stronger like this

the lone wolf
falls prey to uncertainty
the fury of time

But really it’s spectacular as is.

Tim

Lavender

Hi, Jackweb,
This is strong. I can feel the keen sense of anxiety. Perfect title.
Lav