When my spirit was shrouded in stygian gloom,
She came.
With eyes of fire she burned away the darkness.
I was fettered like an eagle in a cage,
She came.
Like a blast from the heavens and tore away my shackles.
I was free.
To soar,
To swoop,
To live again.
Dec 30, 2022
Saviour
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Dear Alex
I sometimes swoon when I read poetry and I just did this is a wonderful poem, it just needs to be read and admired. in my humble opinion.
Nothing here to do but give kudos on beautiful write!!!
Sincerely Jayne-Chloe
Hello Seren
Hello Seren. Thank you for your kind comments. I am so glad you enjoyed, I always write hoping to bring pleasure. Alex
Dear Alex
I really love this write, I was surprised to find it without a comment but that makes it even better I got here first lol
Nice to meet you.
Cheers J
Sorry
It is nice to meet you also. Somehow I put this on twice, yours is the first for this listing. I'm so sorry to disappoint you. I hope you may enjoy some of my other offerings.. Alex
Alex
Its ok, I know all about double posts I've been at the site since 2007 before the crash, worry not it doesn't change how much I like it. I am sure I will enjoy your other work. it is 6am and I have been up most of the night writing a poem for my Dad who passed away not too long ago, it's been an emotional night for me. Couple more to come probably its not finished.
take care J
Condolences.
My condolences, always a sad time. Alex
she must be...
an angel. may you always be together!
*hugs, Cat
she must be
She must be if she has put up with me for almost 55 years.. LOL alex