the rebellion of mankind
a sting to civilization
what a tyrannical world
©® Onyinyechi Cosmos Etu
Jan 09, 2023
OUR EXISTENCE
About This Poem
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
yes!
it is...it really is!
how are you doing? you sound down in the dumps. should we be worried? nice poem.
*hugs, Cat
Thanks Cat!
Yeah, I am. You got it right Cat!
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dear Onyineche,
I hope you get through your rough patch okay. yesterday we got an estimate on repairing our roof because of ice damage: 22,000 $ I hope he takes payments.
love & hugs, Cat
Will definitely pass through it!
Much appreciated for your concern. Wow, that's a huge amount of money for repairing. Indeed, this is a very high budget!
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why shout man
Title un -cap
It's like one is shouting
LoL!
Lovedly, I was not shouting... I have been writing all my titles that way. Check all my posts.
Thanks for stopping by.
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Indeed
Couldn’t agree more. Could disagree until I was out breath. Truly I think it’s everything.
Excellent writing
Tim
I will
Always appreciate you for stopping by, for reading and commenting.
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Our Existence
Hi, Jackweb,
Oppression in humans will only last so long, and then it takes shape in uprisings. Your title gives one a lot to think about.
L
What a clear view!
Perfectly seen! Sometimes I wonder how you understand things deeper. You're one of the sage men here. Thanks for reading and reviewing! .
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