lovedly
lovedly
Dec 29, 2022

Wow Me... Butterfly

Blind fold me love let my hair flow
upon my face bring about a glow
see me as you wish where-ever when ever

let me feel your fingers quiver all over
sending sweet electric shocks down my spine...
lovely and fine

encircle me around my waist let me feel you hard
upon as times advance hold me tight
let me feel a comfort slight as when buds sprout about
my life would be pure bliss without an iota of doubt

just hold me once again
let me bear
the pain
of love enjoy a newer love of joy…
just hold me again yes again
let me like a butterfly
let us across bliss fly
yes fly.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Wow My Butterfly fun poem ah!

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

Rula

Rula

2 years 3 months ago

This is wonderful! Full of enjoyment and love.
I really enjoyed it Lovedly.
Thanks for sharing such enjoyable work.
Much appreciate it.

Candlewitch

exquisite poetry my dear! I think this is your best poem ever! this is worthy of Great poetry!

* hugs & love, Cat

Geezer

Nice rhyming and not too enigmatic. [Are you alright]? Many good wishes for the New Year my friend, ~ Geez.
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Lavender

Hello, Lovedly,
Elegant, and a beautiful call to love in all forms.
Lav

Rosewood Apothecary

Here’s my take; when I read your work I see a picture. There are focal points and movement, balance; like visual art. Your poetry is visual. It does have a certain rhythm to it that seldom feels forced or abrupt and always seems to enhance the image.

You force the reader to create a story around an image. I suspect, like a good teacher, you’ve got your ideas but the reader as the student must form their own. It’s a huge part of your style and when it works for me it’s really provocative. On occasion I’m too tired and lazy for that style. Sometimes I want to be fed without having read the menu if that makes any sense. Pure laziness of course.

This one I like a lot.
Tim