DIVA:
a flower
with tentacles
tingling my heart.
A finger
painting the calendar
on our walls
every 14th February. Speaks words
of geography:
world wide web of love.
SHE
dances in the air, right
beyond it to Galaxy's plains -
far above the rainbow.
I see you
clearly decked in red roses
all over the moon.
SPARKS
of a million kisses
you give;
bubbles of a zillion hugs
let loose,
like flying cannons
in rhythm & bliss; that
BUTTERFLIES
light up my belly,
from your tickles and chuckles. That
you've become
a dream etched in my heart;
a forever, in my arms.
Comments
Interesting
Really excellent and unique format. The poetry is good as well and I love the theme and execution here.
Tim
Thanks Tim for your
Thanks Tim for your appreciation of the poem. It's an attempt on new style and format. Glad it turned out well.
Did you notice that the first
Did you notice that the first words of the 4 stanzas make meaning when put together?
DIVA: SHE SPARKS BUTTERFLIES
This fits into the Valentine theme.
Interesting indeed!
I think...
you should re-post this lovely poem again on February 14th. excellent job.
*hugs, Cat
Sure will do. You clearly