Candlewitch
Candlewitch
Dec 14, 2022

Lady...

a piece of
the Celestial Mother
prevalent
in all womankind
the precious spark
you'll always find
in her lucent face
mistress moon
she is one with
her daughters
flowing
with the waters
of life
like creamy jade
she shall be
my muse
from now
until I fade.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
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Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Northwestern Wisconsin USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allan Poe

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Comments

Geezer

Like Tim, I can't find a thing that I would change. ~ Geez.
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Lavender

Hi, Cat,
I agree. This is pure and beautiful.
L

Rula

Rula

2 years 4 months ago

music through out along with the language used , wow.
Just my cup of tea dear Cat!

lovedly

but Gee calls my FREESTYLE
amateurish
SAD NO
Cats

Geezer

he has my respect, but writes with so many innuendos and euphemisms, that he finds it hard to accept that some do not.
He thinks that I consider him amateurish, when I feel he is anything but. Sometimes, I wish he would write with a little more clarity, but beyond that... ~ Geez.

Candlewitch

I do understand what you are saying and I agree with you. I cannot say it any better than you have done.

*hugs+, Cat

lovedly

and
Gee the best friend I have ever had
I respect both
do tell him

Worthy of frankness and admiration
My poeming is like admixture of thoughts
one too many
glad you both like me
Thanks

lovedly

when if ever I revisit USA
I shall make it a point to bow to him

Its difficult in this world today to find
a good Lady like you
and a GENTLEMAN
like Gee

If only I can fly again
age smartens me
today I am
tomorrow time alone could tell
No one is as blessed
like me
TO BELL a cat

(so I speak in riddles mainly)

Candlewitch

dearest lovedly. the Bell is a sacred tool and one of my favorite things...*ring the bell, close the book, quench the candle

*love, Cat

Candlewitch

not "amen" (for it is a Wiccan/Pagan thing) say "Blessed Be"

*hugs & love, Cat

Candlewitch

:)
thank you, luminous being of kindness

*love, Cat

lovedly

I already said
YOU ARE A TRUE LADY
an accomplished mature one

God bless thee
I'm an insignificant ant
smaller than a grain of
Atlantic sand
but even elephants
hold me with high regards
kindness ma'am