December 2022 Random Challenge Naughty or Nice 🏆 Winner

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Naughty Or Nice (December Contest)

I don't know if
you find it naughty,
but I find it nice,
Gazing into the beauty
of the quiet naked skies.

I find it nice to sneak
through the shining stars;
those to be closer
and many other afar.

I'll be stealing a look
onto the sleepy moon,
for it makes me flying
Like a musical tune.

And yes,
if you find it naughty,
I find it nice,
staring in your beauty,
not only once ,
but a million times.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Jordan, JOR

Favorite Poets: I favor the ones who are closer to humanity and

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Comments

dear Rula,

a great entry and answer to the challenge! it sounds even better when read out loud, it rolls right off the tongue!

*love & hugs, Cat

nice...

change made and noted ;)

*love, Cat

Dearest Candlewhich

I am grateful for the your kind comments. I am happy to know it has your approval.
Thank you so much.

Interesting

What a really unconventional approach to that challenge and a really great poem. Awesome idea, good execution. Like Cat said a breeze to read. It just pulls you right along.

Tim